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Poetry

Posted by lotusflaower - November 12th, 2008


I want to write some thing like this.

To feel as if your not the one anymore is the strength of two deaths,
He was mine, I fell in love so fast he left me out of breath.
Everyday there was nothing more that I wanted than to just be by his side,
and everyday that I didn't have him just made me die alittle more inside.
Months and months went by and my love is still here,
but the day I found his secrets was the day I wrought tears.
Now everyday I stay silenced, just to count all his lies,
and everyday when theres was alittle more, I slip away from his side.
I cry and cry behind his back, but I cant help that I'm in love,
I can't help that I'm naive, its something I wont let go of.
I wish that I could just go back to the begining, when we first engaged eyes,
but this time just look away, for the future....counts lies......

to feel.....as if your not the one anymore........is the strength......of two deaths......

By chloe (sk8tergrlo7)

Poetry


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yeah

T_-

the same as on hers

It makes me feel really good to know someone is a fan of my poem, now that I know you really liked it than maybe someday I'll put another one....
its just my heart is so broken right now I dont want to be writing about the same thing, so I'll just wait till I feel better, n.e.ways you are making me feel better, lol
thanx again!

I hope you feel better